Hello people, it’s been quite a while since the last update. Mostly it has been due to holidays first, then work. It’s not like I didn’t have to time to write: I just didn’t have time to push things here. In fact, today I present a new revision of Broken Destiny, going almost 3/4ths into chapter 2 (with some more artwork). It’s been a little rough when writing, because the characters always felt flat, never as good as I wanted them to be. I also tried to change the style a bit to avoid repetitions of narrative forms.
To see how Jennifer’s story unfolds, hop on to the the novel page and let us know what you think.
I realized I had an updated version of Broken Destiny but that I forgot to upload it. This version introduces even more characters, and even new art from Too. To find out more, turn to the novel page.
I’ve pushed a new version of Broken Destiny to the server. I added a chunk of chapter 1, Awakening, which tells about the strange encounters that Jewell the Swift makes around the area of Iabriaw, assuming it is still Iabriaw…
Interested? Hop to the novel page and grab the snapshot!
Hello people! Today I just put up a new “snapshot” (we’re seriously thinking about changing that term) of Broken Destiny. Finally, I’ve managed to finish the prologue (about 15 pages, and for me that is quite a lot) and now I’ll be able to focus with the real part of the story.
You can grab the snapshot on the novel page. Comments, feedback etc. are welcome.
Due to my involvement in a job transition, I didn’t find as much time for writing as I wanted. Nevertheless, there is a new snapshot of Broken Destiny available at last. You’ll see that is not much longer than before, but the difference is that a whole section has been rewritten from scratch, and now the behavior of the characters and their interactions make more sense (it looked like a bad B-movie first). I’ll also try to write more in the next few days.
For those interested, the download page is your friend.