As you can see, the site has undergone a revamp, with the goal of providing a better design. More updates on the additional features (such as the profiles and the universe settings) will follow in the coming weeks. The Profile page has also undergone some major modifications, with a new profile, thumbnails and some minor correction to the text.
Story updates will begin again from next week. Keep watching this space.
The Vondrak Chronicles
There is no such thing as “no future”
Hello people!
In the past weeks, I’ve been working away on Broken Destiny. But before talking about the changes in this version, let me show you a sample of the new artwork by Bokuman, which you will be seeing in the future:
I’m not going to say where or what is going on right now in this image… I’ll let you find out as the story progresses. And speaking of progress, I have uploaded a new version of the book, this time going almost up to the end of chapter 2. I have to say the work is more difficult in this case, because chapters and events tend to be longer than when I was writing The S.T.E.A.L. Saga. In any case, if you want to know how the adventures of Jennifer and her newly found companion Brendan progress, have a look at this version, which can be found at the usual download location.
Hello people, it’s been quite a while since the last update. Mostly it has been due to holidays first, then work. It’s not like I didn’t have to time to write: I just didn’t have time to push things here. In fact, today I present a new revision of Broken Destiny, going almost 3/4ths into chapter 2 (with some more artwork). It’s been a little rough when writing, because the characters always felt flat, never as good as I wanted them to be. I also tried to change the style a bit to avoid repetitions of narrative forms.
To see how Jennifer’s story unfolds, hop on to the the novel page and let us know what you think.
With some commitments out of the way, we’ll be trying to have regular Broken Destiny updates. Today is no excepltion, and the update brings an updated part of Chapter 2: there is not much in the sense of proper story progression, but a large part from when Jennifer wakes up onward has been rewritten to make it fit more with the original design of the story, and to make additional insights into the world she is in.
If you’re interested to know the details, turn to the the novel page and drop a comment here, if you have any suggestion or criticsm.
Aside the Artwork Day, work has also resumed on the actual writing of Broken Destiny, and I’m happy to announce that I have pushed a new version online, which includes the first part of the second chapter (renamed to Prejudices from the previous version). This part features finally some character interaction (poor Jennifer is no longer alone!) and some answers to the questions that have been floating from the prologue to now.
The novel page hosts the update. Grab it and let us know what you think!